 evansorchid
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Date: April 5, 2007 @ 7:53 PM
Ooh... reverse gated hi hat.... 
The guitar seems more intense than before.
It's starting to remind me of something by The Stone Roses although I can't think of the exact tune.
This is awesome stuff to trip out to...
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 vzeye
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Date: April 6, 2007 @ 8:21 AM
  
  
  
 
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 pangtera
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Date: April 6, 2007 @ 3:44 PM
Very, very eclectic piece. I enjoyed the constant building of the electric guitar, which kept me alert for any sudden explosion of harmony just around the corner!
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 ndstgmoe
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Date: April 6, 2007 @ 4:27 PM
Very cool. That guitar stuff seems to have an Achtung Baby stench about it. I like it when the beat can fumble around and the instruments are driving the rhythm truck. Good cover, mr.
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HenriRoger
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Date: April 7, 2007 @ 7:04 AM
Very good track .
Nice drums and bass groove and cool sounds all around 
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sinai
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Date: April 15, 2007 @ 9:21 PM
very atmospheric, strange how it builds into nothing, just levels off and leaves ya waiting again...
the bassline is the driver behind this...very cool
a tease of a track, but very cool nonetheless
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shutyatrap
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Date: April 20, 2007 @ 10:10 PM
Very Cool. this is darn cool. I like the bass in particular in this. Very groovy feeling to it. Well done my Hobo mate!
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theblacklodge
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Date: April 29, 2007 @ 7:37 AM
The design (arrangement, choice of sounds etc) of this song reminds me so much of a Radiohead tune by the name of "Where I end and you begin".
What this song has, and what it shares with the song I just mentioned, is an intriguing use of contrasts between the drums/bass (I think you've laid down some really nice bass lines through the song) and the fluttery, misty guitars. One is clear and solid (which makes the occasional "drop outs" very effective) and the other diametrically ambient as sounds.
A few people have mentioned that there is no climax and while that's true, for me, this is more than anything the "beginning" of a song. I don't mean that it is an intro (or that it even sounds like one, cause it doesn't) but what I hear in this is a solid, and creative starting point. What you now need is to, somehow, create variation in what's going on. This could be done by letting the bass move into other chords, or not. Maybe just putting more instruments in the pot might be a good initiative to take you to "another page" so to speak. Another point to move further from. To give a more constructive idea: why not try to record some vocals and one more percussive instrument, and see what comes out of it?
I also think that, the song doesn't even have to have a "climax", it just needs more ingredients (could be instruments, melodies, bizarre detours "off road" etc) so that, in the end, a richer structure is formed.
So all in all, you're on to something really nice
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SimonWaldram
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Date: April 30, 2007 @ 4:52 AM
This sounds like some kind of sublime union of Metal Box era PiL (particularly the brilliant bass part) and the glorious guitar extrapolations of Flying Saucer Attack. In other words: I bloody love this!
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kingo
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Date: April 30, 2007 @ 3:59 PM
fucked up trippy headhunter mindfuck. Oh my. That bass is beating the shit out of my basement while the swirling psychedelic guitar guy in the corner won't let me leave.
Very well put together track here.
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Snoogans775
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Date: May 2, 2007 @ 1:59 AM
I think you could've mixed the drums differently, with a softer high end, and that would have helped them congregate with all the other wacked psychos running circles over the rest of this track.
I think you could do a lot by just adding a final instrument over the top of the soundscape you've built up around 2.30 to really blow the top off of this thing.
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 MickeyBreezy
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Date: May 4, 2007 @ 9:16 PM
first of all that hi hat is soooooo entrancing, i seriously like just stared foward at the screen looking at nothing listening to that damn hi hat. i also loved the afore mentioned build up to nothing, i kept hearing it, in my mind like "here we go" and then....
haha, very cool track tho, both the original and your cover of it.
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Bluenevus
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Date: May 6, 2007 @ 4:51 PM
wicked bass...crazy reverse on that hi-hat. That build up keeps the listener waiting for the big bang.
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ebarbarella
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Date: May 10, 2007 @ 10:09 AM
 very nice! i love the bass line  :hynodisk: great cover
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Alwex
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Date: May 12, 2007 @ 7:10 AM
just kept me waiting and waiting the climax. The song was intresting, but to long in my opinion. very hazy tune 
Good luck in the contest 
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 moam
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Date: May 14, 2007 @ 8:17 PM
Lovin' the guitars  but I agree, I wish it would have built up into something more  Overall though, great ambient feeling
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Engine11RDenny
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Date: May 24, 2007 @ 5:24 AM
UFO guitar's very edge-like. This is a cool take on the original more stream line - more exotic than trippy The percussion mix is unique like the panning. Like in the original the instruments are trying to break out of a force field. I think it's more of a streamline ride than an anticlimatic theme ... you know the trains gotta slow down to take the curves right  Sweet bass line too. Nice cover Joe 
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